Great white shark - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia.
Wednesday, September 21, 2011
Draft 2 9/21/2011
Great white shark - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
That is my proof. About 20 years ago scientist thot that humans where the prey but then scientist discovered that humans are not in sharks diets they prefer fish and seals they love seals. Those are the reasons that the Great White Shark is my favorite Aquatic animal.
Wednesday, September 14, 2011
Draft Two
(MI) The Gun is a good Invention because it makes hunting easier. (P)
Proof is that you don’t scare the animals off as easily because you can shoot
the animal from a long distance away.(P) Proof is that you shoot a
sharp bullet in to the animal at 100 miles an hour. That is much easier than throwing a spear at the animal.(I)
In the last 20 years they improved the gun with a scope. The scope
makes seeing the animal from a long distance and aim better. That is a
reason the gun is a good invention.
(MI) The Gun is good for the Military. (P) Proof is that armies go to battle with them because they are the most efficient way to kill something. (P) Proof is that armies have been using guns for hundreds of years.(I) For hundreds of years people have been improving the gun and they still are.(C) That is another reason the gun is a good invention.
(MI) The gun is good for self defense.(P) If you are held hostage you can shoot the person who is holding you hostage.(P) If you are walking down the street and somebody jumps you you can shoot them.(I) For hundreds of years people have been defending themselves against people animals.(C) That is the last reason that the gun is a good invention.
(MI) The Gun is good for the Military. (P) Proof is that armies go to battle with them because they are the most efficient way to kill something. (P) Proof is that armies have been using guns for hundreds of years.(I) For hundreds of years people have been improving the gun and they still are.(C) That is another reason the gun is a good invention.
(MI) The gun is good for self defense.(P) If you are held hostage you can shoot the person who is holding you hostage.(P) If you are walking down the street and somebody jumps you you can shoot them.(I) For hundreds of years people have been defending themselves against people animals.(C) That is the last reason that the gun is a good invention.
Draft 1
(MI) The Gun is a good Invention because it makes hunting easier.
(P) Proof is that you don’t scare them off as easily because you can shoot the animal from a long distance away.(P) Proof is that you shoot a sharp bullet in to the
animal at 100 miles an hour. That is much easier than throwing a spear the animal.
(I) In the last 20 years the improved the gun with a scope. The scope makes seeing the animal from a long distance and ame better. That is a reason the gun is a good invention.
(MI) The Gun is good for the Military.
(P) Proof is that Armies go to battle with them because they are the most afficant way to kill something
(P) Proof is that Armies have been yousing guns for hundreds of years.
(I) For hundreds of years people have been improving the gun and they still are.
(C) That is another reason the gun is a good invention.
(MI) The gun is good for self defense.
(P) If you are held hostage you can shoot the person who is holding you hostage.
(P) If you are walking down the street and somebody jumps you you can shoot them.
(I) For hundreds of years people have been diffending there selves against people animals.
(C) That is the last reason that the gun is a good invention.
(P) Proof is that you don’t scare them off as easily because you can shoot the animal from a long distance away.(P) Proof is that you shoot a sharp bullet in to the
animal at 100 miles an hour. That is much easier than throwing a spear the animal.
(I) In the last 20 years the improved the gun with a scope. The scope makes seeing the animal from a long distance and ame better. That is a reason the gun is a good invention.
(MI) The Gun is good for the Military.
(P) Proof is that Armies go to battle with them because they are the most afficant way to kill something
(P) Proof is that Armies have been yousing guns for hundreds of years.
(I) For hundreds of years people have been improving the gun and they still are.
(C) That is another reason the gun is a good invention.
(MI) The gun is good for self defense.
(P) If you are held hostage you can shoot the person who is holding you hostage.
(P) If you are walking down the street and somebody jumps you you can shoot them.
(I) For hundreds of years people have been diffending there selves against people animals.
(C) That is the last reason that the gun is a good invention.
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