Dear Mr. Randy.


     Hello, my name is Alex and I am 10 years old. I am a student at Technology Engineering Science  Leadership Academy (TESLA) located in Santa Rosa Beach, FL.

    We are working on a project with the essential question, "What is the ultimate living thing?" I chose the Black Mamba  (Dendroaspis polylepis).


     As part of they way we do projects at TESLA we have to find a real expert to look at our work. I was 
wondering if you would please take a few minutes to look over my project and provide me with feedback both on how it might be improved  and things that I have done well. Here is the link to my project:


Thank you,
Alex Kilpatrick
Tesla

Dear Mr. Randy.


     Hello, my name is Alex and I am 10 years old. I am a student at Technology Engineering Science  Leadership Academy (TESLA) located in Santa Rosa Beach, FL.

    We are working on a project with the essential question, "What is the ultimate living thing?" I chose the Black Mamba (Dendroaspis polylepis).


     As part of they way we do projects at TESLA we have to find a real expert to look at our work. I was 
wondering if you would please take a few minutes to look over my project and provide me with feedback both on how it might be improved  and things that I have done well. Here is the link to my project:


Thank you,
Alex Kilpatrick
Tesla

  Survival class
                         
                         Setting North pole  
                             Characters
Bob as lead survival expert
Bill as survival partner
Santa as Santa
Proba as Crazy Civilian Boy
Ophl as Crazy Civilian Girlfriend
Chewy as Chewbaca
Bubba as Bubba
The rest are civilians

Bob - Hi we are out in the north pole it’s been nearly 3 minutes I and the others are starving.

Proba - Give me food now!

Ophl - Ahhhhhhhhhhhh so hungry Wha Wha Wha.

Santa - Ho ho ho.

Proba - Santa give me food now!

Santa - Just eat the snow every thing at the north pole is candy.

Bob - So this is all candy oh my gosh why didn’t we think of that.
Ophl - So this is all candy AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Santa - Yes didn’t you hear me? yal should come in side it looks like your ears are falling off.

Bob - No I am getting payed to do this.

Bill - Bome on CNN will never know.

Bob - Ok!

                  {Everybody sleeps at Santa’s}

Bob - Ahhhhhhhhhhh everybody get up Santa took our stuff.

Bill - Lets go and not waste our time looking
                {they step outside}

Bob - Look that is the CNN helicopter.

Bill - Dang they caught us.

Bob - Run they are after us.

{They run for miles until Santa gets they and heads for space.}

Bob - Hey lets stop we need gas.

Others - Ok.

                     (Bob goes in the space station.)

Bob - Chewy its you.

Chewy - Rawwwwwwwwwww

Bob - Will you come help us take down CNN

Chewy Rawwywwwewwwswww
(Chewy gets to excited and accidentally kills a civilian named Bubba)

Santa - Lets go!

        (They go back to the north pole to battle CNN)

Its a battle in the sky it was a giant battle then they throw Chewy at the CNN helicopter. He mawls they piliot. the Helicopter goes down but Chewy lived. Santa takes everybody home expect Chewy because Bob wanted Chewy to keep him company.


               The End.

Big Writing 10/5/2011

Dear Mr. Randy.


     Hello, my name is Alex and I am 10 years old. I am a student at Technology Engineering Science  Leadership Academy (TESLA) located in Santa Rosa Beach, FL.

    We are working on a project with the essential question, "What is the ultimate living thing?" I chose the Black Mamba (Dendroaspis polylepis).


     As part of they way we do projects at TESLA we have to find a real expert to look at our work. I was 
wondering if you would please take a few minutes to look over my project and provide me with feedback both on how it might be improved  and things that I have done well. Here is the link to my project:


Thank you,
Alex Kilpatrick
TESLA