My Hobbies

     One of my hobbies is Basketball and another is hunting.

     One of the sports is Basketball. I love to play Basketball because I love to hear the swoosh in the net and feel the ball bounce off the ground. I also love to watch basketball. My favorite team is duke. Also my favorite Player plays for Duke. His name is Austin rivers and his dad is Doc Rivers he is the coach for the Boston Celtics.

One weekend I went to the Duke vs FSU game and Duke one. I love basketball.

     Hunting is one of my hobbies. I love to feel the warm kick of the gun. I have killed 18 Big White tail deer. One cold rainy thanksgiving afternoon I killed a Doe and a Buck in one Hunt. It was my best hunt ever. I was so happy I might of exploded.I love to hunt and it is one of my favorite hobbies.


     My last hobbie is minecraft. I love to kill creepers and and catch fish i just love it. I also love how you can change your skin. once on minecraft mined diamond I was so happy. I love my hobbies.

Cool Things About India

One interesting thing about India is there wild life. They have  big bright colored bird called peacocks.
They also have they striped cats called tigers. One time I went to the ZOO and saw a tiger and a peacock.
India already sounds so cool.     Another interesting thing about India is they have cool foods. India a snow cone is ice on a stick. And they also have a good sauce called brown sauce. once my freind Trey told me about brown sauce. India is so cool.     The last interesting thing I know about is there Soccer team. There soccer team is there national soccer team of India. India

Reasons to visit India

Three reasons to visit India. One reason is to see the Taj Mahal

One reason to visit India is to see the Taj Mahal.The Taj Mahal is a historic landmark. It is called the most beautiful building.

That is one reason to visit India.

     My second reason to visit India is to see the endangered Tiger. The tigers in india population is very low so I want to see them before they die out. Also I should just come to see how amazing these creatures are.

That is my second reason to go visit India.

     My third reason to go to India is to see the Himalayan mountains. The Himalayan mountains are the biggest mountains in the world they are as tall as airplanes fly. And I want to limb it.

Those are the reasons I want to go to India.

     I am looking forward to seeing my friends and family.I am also looking forward to eating the Thanksgiving feast. Finally I can't wait to see wait to see my new house.


     The first thing I am looking forward to is to seeing my friends John and Hank and my cousins Steven and Edward.
They are all great friends because they came to my grand dads funeral.Here is a picture of John.

Here is Hank.

All of the them I have known my hole life so they are pretty special.The last time I saw either of them was last year.I just can't wait to see them.


     I am looking forward to eating the Thanksgiving feast.I can't wait to eat all that delicious food like Turkey, mashed potatoes, lamb, fish and pumpkin pie. It will be great.

Also I can't wait to gather around with John and Hank and eat.The last time I ate with them was last year. I just can't wait to eat Thanksgiving dinner.


     

Draft 1

       I am thankful for many things.  One of the things I am thankful for is my family.  Another thing I am thankful for my dog Lola.  I am also thankful for my friends.

        I am thankful for my family.  One reason is that they help me through life. They help me through life by teaching me discipline to help me with manners so I don't mess with the wrong person and get beat up.    Another reason is that they have been with me for my whole life.  Almost 9 years ago my brother Lawson was born and my family was all there.  That is just one great thing that I am thankful for.

        I am thankful for my Dog Lola.

One reason is that my dog Lola picked up my first duck after I shot it down.
Another reason is that when I get sad she licks my face.
About five years ago when I was in kindergarten I used her as a pillow. She was very warm for a pillow.

 Lola is another great thing I am thankful for.
This is a picture of Lola.

So That is another thing I am thankful for.

        I am thankful for my friends.

Some of my friends have been with me for my hole life and some of my friends like Zak have known me for a year or so.

My friends mean a lot tome because they are like family.

For my hole life my friends have been with me.

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        As you can see, endangered species are worth saving because (list your 3 reasons). I hope you think about this amazing species and do your part to help protect it.

By Alex Kilpatrick

Dear Mr. Randy.


     Hello, my name is Alex and I am 10 years old. I am a student at Technology Engineering Science  Leadership Academy (TESLA) located in Santa Rosa Beach, FL.

    We are working on a project with the essential question, "What is the ultimate living thing?" I chose the Black Mamba  (Dendroaspis polylepis).


     As part of they way we do projects at TESLA we have to find a real expert to look at our work. I was 
wondering if you would please take a few minutes to look over my project and provide me with feedback both on how it might be improved  and things that I have done well. Here is the link to my project:


Thank you,
Alex Kilpatrick
Tesla

Dear Mr. Randy.


     Hello, my name is Alex and I am 10 years old. I am a student at Technology Engineering Science  Leadership Academy (TESLA) located in Santa Rosa Beach, FL.

    We are working on a project with the essential question, "What is the ultimate living thing?" I chose the Black Mamba (Dendroaspis polylepis).


     As part of they way we do projects at TESLA we have to find a real expert to look at our work. I was 
wondering if you would please take a few minutes to look over my project and provide me with feedback both on how it might be improved  and things that I have done well. Here is the link to my project:


Thank you,
Alex Kilpatrick
Tesla